greeting is important

We are going to explain about our sounds.
We made this advertisement which tells the listeners how important greetings are. First, we added our conversations with using greetings. Then, we tell the listeners how greetings influence our lives positively. Finally, we suggest that everyone should greet someone next to them in order to make their lives more comfortable.
We used the song “Paint by Numbers” as background music from Youtube, because we wanted to express the comfortable feeling of greetings, and this music makes us cheerful, so we chose this music. The target audience is everyone who wants to make their lives better. The benefit of this commercial is to inspire the listeners to greet someone. This advertisement says, ‘The day cannot start without greetings, greetings make your life shining.’ This message encourages the listeners to start with nice greetings. By doing so, people could have a nice day.
The harmful effects of this advertisement is that the effects depend on people’s personalities. It means that it is a hard thing for people who are not good at talking to someone to greet someone actively. Therefore, when they listen to this message, they might feel uncomfortable.
What we want to tell the listener the most is greeting someone is very pivotal things for our lives.